Cold Autumn Breeze
Dancing Leaves
Naked are the trees
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you should edit to small caps
this is simple and effective
Cold Autumn Breeze
Dancing Leaves
Naked are the trees
though what it should not do...
is rhyme
this should
http://www.haikuworld.org/begin/mdwelch.apr2003.html
thank you for your entry

