He pulled me in, and breathed me
against midnight's gasping curves
where raging sapphire
couldn't match the heat of his eyes
burning me up
his whisper carried my screams
into the mist of moans
swallowed by an aching kiss
His body; a shadowed mansion
I lost myself in corridors
where I discovered ecstasy
in the way
he hung the moon
and captured my twilight......
Author notes
Whispered Devotions
Amaranthine Lover
A contest entry
- Best Prewrites From December 2008 by amaranthine lover.
1605 points, ended January 10, 2009, 21 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - PIF Quicky Picture Prompt! LQQKIE!!! by Girl-Interrupted.
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Comments
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a really nice piece!
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a really nice piece!
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i loved this phrase...
I lost myself in corridors
where I discovered ecstasy
in the wayThe use of metaphors and imagery are awesome..!
thank you for entering and best of luck!
becca:)
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now you're just being ironic lol
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lol why?
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I can tell that you and I will get along quite famously, don't you agree?
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You know, I believe that we will indeed.
I had to think real hard on whether to enter this since you said no erotica; however I didn't find this to be too much of an erotic poem... umm... more a sensual one I would say. -
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there's a difference: graphic and non-graphic, cmon we're all adults here
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I couldn't agree more.
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Couldn't agree more! Great passion and wonderful metaphors... Best of luck.
Ken
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Nice job. You catch us up in your dream of passion. I lost myself in corridors: that's a great phrase.
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