awaking the wolf
shakes the night snow from his pelt
a howling blizzard
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- HAIKU by Malabu.
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awakend wolf
shakes snow from his pelt
last night's blizzard
modern ku came to mind
thank you for your entry -
awaking the wolf
shakes the night snow from his pelt
a howling blizzard
a prince of the wilderness
heeds the voice of his master
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Oh, this is great. I love it
Well done and good lluck to you,
~Mary O
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is something widely felt
this penetrates as one wanting their den, and there is such a resonance of how the storm is major as decibels outside in the struggle. it makes one think how shelter is primary comfort against such and any extremes to sense normalcy for endurance... or a carried covering for short term
this had a nice twist of parallel between reaction and action.
it read certainly intensifying, enough for nature's matters not to be numbing indentifying...
called Carolyn
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He's just a k-9 too ,bless his soul. This Haiku has bite,both alive and wild.
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Brilliant with some wonderful
imagery here. Well done and good luck!
Jeremy0826 -
Brillantly done. Vivid and beautiful imagery.
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Excellent haiku--the use of the word "howling" is clever and apt, pertaining as it does to both blizzard and wolf.
Good one,
Bill
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what a nice picture of wolf in its habitat, winter speaks volumes in its natural atmosphere,good luck
in the contest
voe -
what a nice picture of wolf in its habitat, winter speaks volumes in its natural atmosphere,good luck
in the contest
voe
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A snow wolf, this is quite beautiful its like a scene, a very natural image. I like this alot.
I think this is perfect...
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