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Winter in Atlanta

Winter is august
Only when it is snowing.
It never snows here.

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It's supposed to be raining on Christmas. 59 degrees. No fun. The rest of the country gets snow...

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  • MusiCrazy
    March 5
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    don't feel bad, central sc doesnt see snow either, just occasional sleet.


  • Cynthia Gaines gold member
    February 19

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    Very thought-provoking...

    Thank you for your profound entry, and for teaching me something new. Good luck in the contest!! Peace, xx Cyn


  • Malabu
    January 23

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    Winter in august
    new color for summer's green
    it never snows here

    remember to small cap your writing avoid punctuation
    thank you for your entry


    • Rayne 4 EVR
      January 23
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      i meant to write winter IS august. august is an adjective. it means impressive. but thank you for your comment about punctuation and capitalization.


  • DogFish silver member
    December 28, 2008

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    Winter is august
    Only when it is snowing.
    It never snows here.

    In lazy lazy Georgia
    the sleepy sun just sits there!


  • Jeremy0826 silver member
    December 25, 2008

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    Well no snow here in Hawaii!
    The weather is rather rainy and overcast
    lately. Great Haiku and good luck!




    Jeremy0826


  • misticmoonlite gold member
    December 24, 2008

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    wow. no snow, here'''' is some,lol nice haiku to show no wintry weather there, good luck in his contest
    Voe

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