A shell of a woman,
although warm and beautiful to be amidst
Inside her heart is cold, dying to express her sorrow
she never meant to cause pain or hard feelings.
But her way of showing affection was warped
to his soul, he sees only lies and harshness
Emmiting from her voice.
But what is really in her tone is
A loss of the love she once knew
and the man who will forever hold her heart
{I chose Cold by Crossfade because I can relate very well to this song and it defines me to every word.)
Author notes
inspired by Crossfade "Cold"
A contest entry
- Option, Options, Options by wakawaka05.
2050 points, ended January 6, 32 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comment nicely: I bite.
Comments
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So sad.The pain of loss here as her wishing she still held his love and the pain he feels about her thinking something totally differant.You wrote this well.I liked the backround that you chose as well as the title.The flow to this was good.You should have won a trophy I think.Great job.
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What a great write. I love your take on the prompt. Thank you for putting why you chose the option. Best of luck in the contest and in future writing. Have a Merry Christmas and a Happy New Year.
Caity
>Wakawaka<
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