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Shattered Shield of the Afternoon

Security -
Oh bring me security -
As the echoes of strangers' voices,
Penetrate my ease,
As they take away my feeling of protection;
Induce my ominous thoughts
And I am nothing left but a confused child;
A frightened child,
Left in the shadows;
Afraid to ever go and be burned by the same ray of sunlight;
The imagination,
The mere concept
Influences my fear
And I sit, feeling like I was falling;
Everyone unaware,
Everyone occupied,
To notice my pain,
My bothersome burdening agony;
Reflected by their taunts,
By their laughs,
Their wrongly sickening laughs,
Acting as a supremacist to my insanity;
At this moment,
This very moment -
Til who knows when,
It will drag,
And continue to pull;
Dragging me on and on;
In the need of protection
Of this pain,
Of this bothersome burdening agony;
I need imperviousness -
I need obliviousness -
Distraction!
Oh bring me distraction!
For the need for invulnerability
Is chained behind the giddy smirks of my ominous moment -
And the ardor,
And the desire,
For that someone's empathy grows stronger,
As it is repeatedly rejected;
Continuously declined,
By the fear of ardor alone,
Of desire alone;
It cannot be recalled,
As it is out of pure shades of blue,
And the cause cannot be encountered,
For I am not as I recall,
And I am not as you can encounter -
But what for everyone of us can find;
For everyone of us can experience;
To find that there is no reason,
As I am repeatedly rejected;
Continuously declined
By the light
And the avidity in my protection...

Author notes

I had a weird ominous feeling today afterschool. I think its my PMS. Who knows. Oh well. xD

Honesty is my future's savior

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  • myusikah
    December 23, 2008

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    homaygodsh. I seriously thought that I wrote this with awesomer vocab. Welcome to the Emoetic world.

    -->pia♫♪


    • Orange Tides
      December 23, 2008
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      lmao
      Should I use this for slam?


      • myusikah
        December 24, 2008
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        Well, you should use any poem...as as judge, I can't really tell you. But but but...I'll judging on the meaning and depth and abstractiness. I'm GONNA CRUSH SITZ...Lawl, I shtill haff hiz AG. KYYAAA!!!

        But yeah. Use any, besides, the SLAM isn't til MARCH doodz!

        Luff yahh!!!


        [I think I'm on my PoMS DAMNIT!!!]

        Teehee I entarred jhur cawnteshst.


        On second thought, I wanna write a new one. Can you make it so that we could enter more than once?


        • myusikah
          December 26, 2008
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          Tee hee, this is when you didn't know I was the ANONYMOUS author of "Huh?" >.> I miss the good ole' daysz. >.>

        • Orange Tides
          December 26, 2008
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          I already did. It's 2 per person. xD

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