Farther away from what we know.
Forced to hold on
Only to let go.
Praying for rapture from forces so evil.
Ignored by God.
Exhaulting the devil.
Begs and screams are heard from afar.
Trapped below
With terrors that scar.
Heaven's high angels appear in light.
Murder and death
Consume their sight.
Report back to God so undivied.
Their verdict to yeild,
Save the one's who've abided.
God releases his army and cleanses the land.
The ones in his truth
Gain the upper hand.
The sickening sight of scars and bruises
Yeilds to solid trust.
The devil finally loses.
Author notes
It's about the world asking for help.
A contest entry
- crying for your help... by PrabhuDayal Khattar.
400 points, ended January 6, 11 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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Humm..very well thought the prompt..and brought the message in the front..I love it..and my thanks for sharing it..
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oh this is way interesting. I like it a lot. Great job and the first stanza is captivating. Interesting rhyme scheme and lay out. Great imagery. Overall great write!
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