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This time it's done

So you see the way i look at you,
Do you ever wonder?
Kill the doves.
Raise the deceased.
Day in and day out,
Always a strife.

So, even if this makes me cry,
Darken the light,
It's time to push me out of your sight.

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I don't have a medal, so i put a break there because even if this is disqualified i still like how it came out...thank you for helping me put this one together

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