it moves stealthily with heavy impact;
words are weights
binding to affections, ideologies
that have grown accustomed
to constant suppression.
i re-read one of our old conversations
fully aware of what would unfold.
Author notes
... old conversations... an occasional weakness.
option 30 ---- garth brooks, more than a memory.
i chose this because this song always used to play @ my summer job & i grew to know the words, like the song & in a way, relate to it on some level.
prompt: UNEARTH
A contest entry
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What should I alter? What should I keep? Does it work w/the prompt?
Comments
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I like the depth of this piece and how it makes me want to delve into it and know what has unfoled. great job.
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An original write
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I like how this starts, but I am not satisfied with how it ends.
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What a great write. I like your take on the prompt. Thank you for puttng why you chose the option. That song greatly relates to one of my past relationships. Best of luck in the contest and future writing. Have a Merry Christmas and a Happy New Year.
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