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When He Hits Me It Gives Me Butterflies.

Caress,,
With an itchy
((fist))

A contest entry

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  • Ryno
    December 23, 2008

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    Incredible. I loved this different point of view. This has such a great concept and by straying away from what was expected and adding in something completely different, it turned out very affective. I think you could've done without some of the punctuation though. Thanks for the entry.


    • PureAmethyst
      December 24, 2008
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      Thanks for the HM, really great contest, It's difficult to get a powerful message across with five words so I loved the idea.

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