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I have Lost the Will to Live, Nothing More to Give.

Flash of white-hot light.
Whisk of cruelest night.
Dawn breaks, sun in sight.
No, just lies, just shadow.
A diet of death,
Of the most wicked kind.
Charcoal and sulfur.

Black Moon, incessent boon.
Dark Light, Bright white.
Last fight, first right.
When the horsemen ride, in the last of night.
Suffering returns, death awakens.

Beat down,
Bite.
Bedazzle,
Behead.
Born Free,
Die Blind.




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  • shattered.heroine
    November 23
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    Very grunge sounding. Would make an amazing song most definitely. Very impressive!


  • Levis
    November 17
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    Strange and gruesome Sounds like a metallica song, and your a good writer Keep it up


  • Rasha Dark-Panther
    December 24, 2008
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    Wow

    Makes my tummy bubble all angry.

    I like it!