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I HAD A MISCARRIAGE RECENTLY AND THIS IS HOW IT FELT
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This read like it was a a burden that you needed to get off your chest, which, naturally, being through what you were, you did -
I don't usually like form poetry like this, but, this one was unusual - and oh so very vivid to read, in a rather disturbing way ...
Thank you for sharing it with us
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I hope you will be well laura! HOlla if I can do anything!
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Awwww
i'm so sorry hunny.
s if u want to talk just message me
Btw if u dunno who this i ish ashley AKA emo monkey -
I kinda liked the format - created an insanity. So sorry for your loss Thanks for the entry.
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Aww I'm sorry laura i know how hard it is to lose a child its never fun and the pain never quit goes away. I hope that in the future you will be justly rewarded for the pain youve had to go through.
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