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im sorry

i thought
that i loved you
but i don't
i never did
but i care for you
as a friend
I'm sorry
if I'm hurting you
but i have to
be true to myself
i cant keep
living this lie
there's this other guy
in my life now
i truly love him
can we just
be friends
i will understand
if you cant

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  • Symphony
    February 22

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    This read to me more as thoughts running through your mind rather than a poem but with that said -

    What is poetry but our thoughts, and after all, it sounded like something that you needed to get off your chest -

    It is much better to break up with someone and hurt them whilst doing so, rather than to lead them on - and i commend you for taking the harder, but fairer route!

    thanks for entering