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SuperNova The Christmas Time Blues - My Day 23rd December 08

SuperNova
The Christmas Time Blues
The world getting ready
Then coming down with the flu
Nice black jacket
Carrying back a mop and curtian rail
Back to your house
My old memories now fail
Coming back later
Once the sun had set
Walking across the field
With a lit cigarette
Opening cards
And eating rich cake
This was the time
Dan was at a wake
Sitting and Chatting
Earlier that day
About grief
And Loss
Of family who've passed away
Saying goodbye
Not a funeral event
One final hug at your gate
I leave before the sun arising
The trip back
I was constantly athinking
If I did get stab
What of the feeling?
But that's a silly thought
So I kept on walking
All the way home
Until the morning

Author notes

Yeaaa Shell, these events arnt in order.... I know. haha

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