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What a soldier wants for christmas

Its Christmas
And I don't want much
Take me straight to Chicago
I'll be fine

I want a hug from my mom
To sit on my bed not in a bay
With nothing to do
I'll just play my playstation 2

Its Christmas
And I don't care about spending money
Lets spend time, together

I want my dad to touch me on the shoulder
Tell me he cares
I want to speak with my friends
About the past, future or nothing at all

Its Christmas
And I don't want much
Take me straight to Chicago
I'll be fine

No matter what you get tonight
You'll want more
And I'll just want home

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  • bebeluver
    January 9
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    Sounds a tad warming, but home is just a place.


    • Crazy-Dan
      January 25
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      in response to wat u said about my poem back on the 9th of Jan"Sounds a tad warming, but home is just a place. "
      home is more than a place when ur a soldier, its where u'd rather be

  • michaeline
    January 9

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    Your words are filled with so much pain I wish I could take you to Chicago.May God be by your side and keep you safe and give you a safe return home.


  • Draig aine gold member
    January 9
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    very movig

    I hope you get your wish