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Scraping my soul

Tears scrape across my soul

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  • individuality gold member
    March 25

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    ah those tears, they have some rough edges at times, and as they flow the spirit becomes red raw, a good piece.

  • TonyT
    March 3

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    Short, but VERY visual. Kind of brings to mind the phrase
    A kiss is more than a kiss. A tear too can conceal much more
    than is seen at first glance...

    Tony


  • silversith9
    January 14
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    ???

    I might be missing something deep or a new kind of poetry, but why only one line?


  • Wolf Mistress silver member
    December 29, 2008

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    The pain feels real...I do hope it's just a sad mood around those dark overrated Christmas day's...

    XXJeannette

  • Cindy
    December 27, 2008
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    very sad and powerful


  • wattle silver member
    December 27, 2008

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    I'm thinking your soul is in good hands. --- Thank you


  • HammeR
    December 25, 2008

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    I have to ask if that scrape would be that of a dagger point tearing as it sliced across your soul?
    Damn pirates and thier baldrics, make sure the next one takes his gear off before he gets too close to you girl

  • Warrior7
    December 25, 2008

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    This is deep mate, one line of brilliance because i can feel the pain.

  • KimberLea Cynn
    December 23, 2008
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    That is powerful...makes you feel a sort of pain in your chest. Kudos for that!

    †Lea


  • Still Standing gold member
    December 23, 2008
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    powerful

    very powerful good luck to you!!!

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