WE FIGHT CURSE AND KILL,
A contest entry
- 5 words, be powerful by Ryno.
460 points, ended December 24, 2008, 66 entries
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5 words of truth
Yes that's so true, just the way life seems to be. A powerful statement you've written, one that is as true today as was ages back in time. Only one mistake, comma should be after fight. ''We fight, curse and kill''. That's the correct way, still you did well to come up with this one liner. Take care and keep writing to better youself.
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Too true, sadly. Thanks for the entry.
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You've got humans figured out !
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It certainly seems that way in many parts of the world but life isn't all that bad when we open our hearts to it. A fine entry to this contest. Good luck to you.
Brian
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Great work and how true it is....good luck
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good choice of words, best of luck in the contest.
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