I am on my knees
I am begging you please
What I did was wrong please forgive me
I can't sleep without you
By my side
Every day and every night
I dream about you and me
Help I need my love
Don't leave me like this
Your like the sky thats above
Although we fight
Just hang on tight
You and me forever
Thats what love is like
When you left I knew my life was incomplete
All I can remember is the first day when we meet
Love is sometimes like a butterfly
It flies freely in the sky
But when I'm with you
You make me feel so right
{HELP I NEED YOU}
A contest entry
- crying for your help... by PrabhuDayal Khattar.
400 points, ended January 6, 2009, 11 entries
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Comments
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Ah..what a wonderful way to express the truth of the inside with all its honesty and innocence..well done....thanks for sharing..
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A+
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Beautiful, very mature poem for your age, Impressed. (I don't underestimate pple younger than me, but i am still impressed.) Good luck in the comp, keep it up, poet.
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