He had hair
As dark as ashes
Ebony
Black and it fell
Freely against
His shoulders
As he walked
Across the stage
He had eyes
brown, and deep
Hardship from past
shown darkly
A mischevious
little boy
as he walked
across the stage
He had a voice
that rung the doorbells
on the entryway of
God's angelic chorus
Singing of vampires
which is a sweeping
metaphor for something
deeper than that
As he walked
across the stage.
Author notes
perfectly describes my beautiful angel-Gerard
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Cool
I'm a mcr fan but you took it to the next level, nice job.
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Great job!!! NICE WORDS! I <3 Gerard Way also!!
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wow this must be your dream guy. he sounds it anyway. love ya girly
~Okie
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Oh god I loved this! It does describe him perfectly!! such an angel he is, wonder if he even realizes it himself? Anywho....I loved the repetition....it added to the overall amazingness of the poem!
Im thinking it should be "that rang the doorbells" instead of "rung the doorbells"...just thinking. But seriously other than that, I think this is perfection! ♥Rhi
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