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24th December 2008 - Nothing In The End - Full Entry

 

 

 

 

 

 

I am merely a peg--

 

a little leg

lumbering lonesome

upon an abandoned line

 

my purpose served

with no preserved usage,

deserving to dangle

without a dream...

 

and fine judgements

find assumptions cast quietly

amongst many webs

of woe

that tangle truths

between bitter breezes.

 

I wheeze in freezing conditions,

sneeze splinters

through teeth that never chatter

and shatter simple wishes

that tear truths from birds.

 

Words whisper winter

along whithered veins,

while rainstorms and hail

weep gently...unheard

and I'm left to my thoughts--

 

addressing old nylon needs

 

as soul bleeds for affection

that ancient arms lost.

 

Heart sings of a spring

it knew only once

and the view from the west

before east closed its eyes

 

of flowers

and trees

and companionship's worth

 

and bees that wear warmth

in beginnings

and buds.

 

And here now I wilt

while flooded with fear,

as tears trip uncaught

in tinctures of snow--

 

this white world surrounds

to coat me morose...

 

and neglect soon forgets

this little peg

left alone.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Author notes

Options Used::

Option #2, word used - "Hollow"
Option #3, title used - "Nothing In The End"


Laura Lamarca
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  • carole21
    January 8
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    interesting and well done . . congrats on the HM !!


  • SpydurPoet gold member
    December 28, 2008

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    Wow. This is...incredible. You did a great job with the flow and rhymes. The emotion was stunning, too.
    Thank you for entering and best of luck in the contest.
    Write on.
    ~*~SP~*~


  • motel silver member
    December 26, 2008

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    one can really feel the sense of isolation in this piece and the desperate longing in the background.
    thanks and good luck in the contest.


  • BehindTheShadow
    December 25, 2008
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    Spectacular!

  • SoulWhispher
    December 24, 2008

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    This is so sad, yet flows with such hidden emotion, it really reaches out to the reader and yest the sould does bleed for affection, wonderfull, blessings with love John


  • Mairi bheag gold member
    December 24, 2008
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    Excellent.


  • storiesuntold gold member
    December 23, 2008
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    Very good

    Its amazing the story you have spun from this one little peg great work here


  • roninwort
    December 23, 2008

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    THe imagery you used really intrigued me. I couldnt stop reading once i began. I can feel the emotion flowing from this amazing poem. Thank you so much for your entry and good luck.

    Ronin


  • Nom de Plume
    December 23, 2008

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    You can feel the emotion in this, and sure weve all felt like a little peg too..

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