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Party Down

Party down
then burn it down.
Revelry turned
to dynamic hate,
fueled by the
hot passions
running rampant
before we were
civilized.

A contest entry

Tell me what you think, but kindly, please.

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  • Lady Altheia
    December 23, 2008

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    Hmmm, sounds like some party. Revelry can get you into trouble though or so I am told. Good luck to you in the contest.


  • paulcreates silver member
    December 23, 2008
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    I didn't get the memo. we're civilized now? lol

    Paul

  • jodygirl
    December 23, 2008

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    Excellent take on the picture prompt. You really have a way of getting right to the nitty-gritty of a poem. Great work and good luck in the contest.

  • Bad Bill
    December 23, 2008

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    A brilliant response to the picture prompt. Few, but powerful, words used, and the irony of the concluding lines is masterful.

    Excellent work,
    Bill


  • TwilightDazzles
    December 23, 2008

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    This is a marvelous write for the picture. Such few words, yet with a great message. Thanks so much for entering and best wishes in the contest

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