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Birth

First Birth-
the start of life and the beginning of death
  the awakening of responsibility and the dashing of freedom
  a miracle
    a tragedy
    a hope of a better world
Second Birth-
the end of death and the beginning of life
  the shedding of darkness and the covering with light
  the exchange of a swaddling of filthy rags for a robe of righteousness
    the guarantee of a glorious eternity

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  • wingdreams
    December 26, 2008
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    Profound thoughts neatly penned.