Glaring stars of heavenly sparks
Sprinkled on velvet sheets of benitoite
Whirled round in the misty air,
Until they reached the horizon.
Cascades of golden treasures
Admiring the serenity of the sky,
Soon embraced the fuming ocean.
Relentless waves hustled
By gusty winds,
Rammed the rugged edges
Of the sturdy rocks.
And as the sunlight danced,
weaved and frolicked,
Tongues of fire glistened
Between the blades of the ocean.
Author notes
Picture prompt:
C) http://marcadamus.deviantart.com/art/Ocean-s-Fury-58639621 By MarcAdamus
sweet innocence
color: Blue
A contest entry
- I'm new to AP!!! This is my 1st contest!!! by roninwort.
3000 points, ended January 7, 43 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - the ocean by Guerrero.
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Comments
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nice job.. it had nice imagery..good luck
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This was such an incredible write. The imagery you wrote was amazing. Emotion was great, too.
Thanks for entering and best of luck.
Write on.
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This is a very beautiful poem. I love the ocean and everything around it. You do a great job of capturing the images of the stormy sea smashing into the rocky shore. Thank you very much for your entry and good luck.
Ronin
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