Pulsating through my veins,
My blood flushes my cheeks now on fire.
Crimson Red blazing as I think of the Intimacy
I want to share with you,
And only you.
I want to be beautiful to you,
Because of the love you've created with me.
A passion under covers;
Only true lovers can create.
Oh how I can only imagine
How wonderful making love will be.
You make me weak in the knees,
And I haven't even met you yet.
I can't wait to find you,
My soulmate, my love.
I'll be waiting.
Author notes
PaintedParisPassion loooooves the color Purple
and this is a mix of option 3 and 6.
Good luck judging.
This is not really written with any one person in mind. I just found myself daydreaming one day while sitting next to my window staring at the rain falling. I starting thinking of how I hope there is someone out there for everyone. And i do honestly believe there is. Real love, even if there is a little pain here and there and even if its tough at times, its real so it is well worth all of that and then some.
A contest entry
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i believe that there is somebody meant for everybody tooo!!
we are so twins.
this is really pretty sophs.
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ilyyy
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we are awesome. endofstory. ily moree
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wow im going threw what your discribing so this hit a verry good note with me ... wow great job and good luck in the contest
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Wow. Wow. No you are so not silly. I loved this poem. I love this poem so much. The emotion was incredible. It really struck a nerve, especially where I am in life right now.
Thank you for entering and best of luck.
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Ah, anticipation. It makes it all that much better. I think you have expressed the longing very well. Good luck in your contest.
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Not silly at all for their is someone there for you
Often when young people being in such a rush to find this love they marry another and in time the one for you your paths cross and within the look as your eyes meet you know its like a love lost and rekindled .
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Man... I KNOW what this feels like, I've been feeling it alot recently myself.
Waiting to find taht perfect someone, maybe even have someone in mind! Yet, you are still alone.
But waiting.
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Anyone who doesn't believe in soulmates is a jackass . Seriously. The earth tilts, life comes into focus and you find a lost part of your heart and only through one touch, the essence of soul. . --So I've heard. . Keep writing. . oh, one typo.
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Thanks for the comment, wheres the typo lol, i cant find it
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line 12
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Haha thanks
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First off Welcome to AP =]
to experience true love and desire and longing.. ahh interesting. I am with my boyfriend now for 8 months and we have not had sex yet. True love does not need intamaxy simply a great love and care for that person. before him I did not care who it was I had sex with but now... I want it to be him and only him. which i believe you have captured in this piece =]
Crimson Red blazing as I think of the Intimacy
I want to share with you,
And only you.
This perhaps is a virgin's lament.. i love it so much and probally describes my boyfriend.. Good job dear and good luck in the contest and feel free to enter mine.. It's my first
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awww this is so cute soph!
there is totally someone out there for us,
and we are going to go out and find them hells yeahhh
i cant wait to live with you!!!!
eeek im so excited.
i just wish it was now!
ilyyyy
jules
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no like seriously, i cannnot wait for you to move in. Then i wont be alonnnnne. :] and yea, we are so going to find them, and they are going to be hot, and i think i might have already found him...mayyybe...ahh idk. lol i looove you more than i love johnny depp, and i looooooooooooooooove johnny depp haha. ♥
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pretty much bay city wont know what to do with us
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Oh i know!! ahh
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I pray that your right, i pray there is somebody out there for everyone that comes without pain...
Anyway this is an amazing poem. You put a beautiful passion into these words but you also put that sense of anticipation of the experience into it as well. Great job. Thank you very much for the entry and good luck.
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