I promise.
To kiss you good night, every night.
To work out any problems that we may have.
To try to see things through your heart.
I promise
To give you the best of me
even on my bad days.
To always be your best friend and
the person that you can count on
for the rest of your life.
I promise
to compromise in my insistance
of the things that I want. To
treasure you and make you
feel special everyday of our life together.
I give
to you my heart, for it beats only for you.
I give
to you my soul, for it breathes because of you.
I give
to you my mind, for it thinks of you first.
I give
to you me, for I love you with every fiber
of my being
Author notes
I chose VOWS and Promises. This was exactly what I would want someone to say to me in front of all of our friends, family and god on the day that we became as one.
A contest entry
- Love Still Lingers by Scyphon.
1200 points, ended January 3, 21 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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very very beautiful
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This would be a wonderful thing to have happen.
Best of luck to you.
Riftkin
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I think that this is beautiful I hope that you do well in his contest thanks for sharing your heart and talent much love always
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This was so beautiful. I love the idea of personally written vows, tho some think it is about one upping the other. I believe there is nothing better than a vow set from the heart. Truest emotion, pouring of the soul. Love should have no boundary and therefore should be able to come from its true location, our hearts. You captured that, thank you. Well done and gorgeous heartfelt emotion. Take care and be well
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