He said
her strength washed over him;
such possibilities
in her wavering reality
she tried
settling her sandcastles on shifting shores
watched sudden rage of waves
undo her, again and again
now, when she sleeps,
he comes to wet her dreams down
she is aware
of how far she fell:
A sleeping giant
Author notes
Prompt : Picture C http://marcadamus.deviantart.com/art/Ocean-s-Fury-58639621 By MarcAdamus
A contest entry
- I'm new to AP!!! This is my 1st contest!!! by roninwort.
3000 points, ended January 7, 43 entries
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Comments
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Wow. This was absolutely amazing. I loved this. "settling her sandcastles on shifting shores"
That line hit me so hard.
You did a fantastic job on this.
Thanks for entering and best of luck
Write on.
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This is unlike most poems i have read. A very unique outlook on this picture and you have drawn me into the poem. Amazing job. Thank you for the entry and good luck.
Ronin
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