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A Palm On The Pane -Bronze

Missing image



Beyond litter and glitter
glares a frozen pane

benign brittle memory
etching truth

that is framed
by sudden cold, old, thought

Christmas has never been the same

since sky stole you
in jet streams
that go around the world
and revisit
on just such nights.







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  • trekkergirl
    December 28, 2008
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    I like the background. Congrats on the trophy well deserved.


  • Quietgirl17
    December 23, 2008
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    Nice. This is very good. It's interesting and I like it. Good job.


    • CarolDesjarlais silver member
      December 28, 2008
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      Ty, again. Sometimes I am able to write out my angst.....a sudden swift memory came back and it needed to be expressed.