seeking the truth in life is so annoying
elements hide like dew under a dry stone
a likely haven for the earth's hidden low life
never a place for mere shining amazement
discouraged, I ask and no one answers
on occasion I resume the endless quests
flicking stones aside, my mind travels again
the invisible truth may almost win
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prompt (4) (A)
"Leave no stone unturned" by EB Lytton
carole21/green
A contest entry
- I'm new to AP!!! This is my 1st contest!!! by roninwort.
3000 points, ended January 7, 43 entries
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Excellent
Such a great choice of words. So very well done. Best of luck in the contest.
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Hmm. I loved this. The place I am in life right now exacerbates the emotion here to a degree that perhaps only I can understand, but even if I were not in this place, it would still be an outstanding poem. Excellent.
Thanks for entering and best of luck.
Write on.
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thanks
many thanks for the comments on a rocky climb . . !!
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Very good write here
You have written a very good poem with a storyline of love inside out where the body so needs it and often finds oneself without direction to breath it in
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I like the imagery you use. This is a harder prompt to use but you did a good job. Thank you for the entry and good luck.
Ronin
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