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After the lava cools the spring is more beautiful than ever.

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I actually made up this quote for a person when I was in the hospital. They were going through a really hard time and I came up with this for them.

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  • aslanlight
    January 14

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    Wonderful! Reminds me of joy coming in the morning after a night of sorrow.

    Peace Georgia


  • Keith Drew gold member
    December 23, 2008

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    The lave is gray for centuries before it bears fruit.
    No spring nor summer to co lour its form.
    I do not understand the meaning?


    • alco
      December 23, 2008
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      Geez, it's just meant to say that it's calmer after the storm, just in different words. Not everything needs to be anazlysed & have the "meaning" make sense scientifically.
      It's a beautiful sentiment, written for a friend in time of need. More people should take it upon themselves to bring light into someone elses life, as Elvenfairy has done here.
      I mean no disrespect to you, Keith. Just my point of view. Merry Christmas.

      ~Monica ♥♥♥


  • Shades of Pale silver member
    December 23, 2008
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    pretttttttttttttttttty! I loveled it!