Predatory, carnal, I hunger, I seek, I thirst. I yearn for your honey and your poison. Pradatory, carnal, I hunger, I seek, I thirst, I long for your honey and your poison.
Your veins are hard, but I find a way through, your blood is not red but gold, your veins are hard, but I find a way through, your blood is the colour of midnight, pouring.
It's warm, thick, tastes like nectar upon my lips, I hunger for your honey and your poison, it's warm, thick, tastes like joy upon my lips, I thirst for your honey, for your poison upon my lips.
Beat, beat, beat goes the rhythym, pound, pound, pound, goes the beat, its all cosmic dances and fairie dust, beat, beat, beat, goes the rhythym, pound, pound, pound , goes the beat, your blood is the colour of sackcloth and coal.
Sunlight and shadow, contraction, constriction, it's all cosmic dances and fairie dust, sunlight and shadow, contraction, constriction, it's all cosmic dances and angel dust.
Underneath the shade of a poplar tree, secrets told, secrets lost, secrets buried, underneath the leaves of a sycamore tree, secrets told, secrets lost, secrets buried.
Iam seeking, Iam searching, your soul upon my lips, I thirst for your honey and your poison, Iam seeking, Iam searching, your blood upon my lips, I hunger for your honey and your poison.
Underneath the shade of a poplar tree, secrets offered, secrets uttered, secrets slain, underneath the leaves of a blossom tree, secrets told, secrets lost, secrets buried.
Iam watching, Iam waiting, your blood upon my lips, I hunger for your honey and your poison, Iam seeking, Iam searching, your soul upon my lips, I hunger for your passion and your poison.
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This is interesting, although the grammatical errors are very distracting - apostrophes and capitolized I's are not really that difficult to create.
It is a very interesting title, and a deeply emotive piece despite the grammmar. It is dark, and a littel chilling, but in a way that I am sure you intended, and is expected from pieces of this caliber. It is fairly easy to read, and the flow is choppy in a sense that the deep imagery and the feelings mesh in a very nice way.
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nicly written. i like the tittle:]
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this is a lovely piece, it's really emotive and powerful, a brilliant write, well written and easily read well done. =)
Jess xXx
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this is a lovely piece, it's really emotive and powerful, a brilliant write, well written and easily read well done. =)
Jess xXx
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Thanx for reading, glad you like!
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