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Let Go

Should I let go
It might ease the pain
I just want to hold on
so tight
they think I'm crazy
for still wanting her
she is my soulmate
my bestfriend
why do I hold on so tight
if I let go the pain goes away
but I love her with my soul
I can't let go

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  • Quietgirl17
    December 31, 2008
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    Wow very strong write here. Well written and great job.