A forlorn
and ship wrecked heart
never carriers love to the soul.
It looks like a dried garden of flowers
and empty clouds acting as fruitless couriers.
I bow down to the love forms surging in springs of life
though they try effortlessly to inundate me
in streams of despair
and screaming in lots of pain and sorrow.
Author notes
-Despair
purush
**** Green
A contest entry
- I'm new to AP!!! This is my 1st contest!!! by roninwort.
3000 points, ended January 7, 43 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Wow. That was incredible. I definitely felt the emotion here. I loved the second stanza the best, the imagery was...breath taking.
Thank you for entering and best of luck!
Write on.
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Well done here
You write to bring the very voice of tears and the sream of pain to the very life form of itself . Bravo
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I really enjoyed reading your poem. It has a lot of heart-felt emotion put into it and i could feel it.
Your last stanza was simply beautiful and the imagery you used was great. Thank you very much for your entry and good luck!
Ronin
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