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Dreams be dreams

 
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I crie with the heavens tears,
I dance with the rushing wind,
I dream of a lover along with Gaia.
 
For where will we shed our tears,
And how will we dance with ourselfs,
If Gaia gives up the fight of survival.
 
For no heavens tears can wash it away,
And no wind can blow it off the surface,
And our mother earth can't live in it.
 
Our luxuriouse lifestyle is killing us,
But are we prepaired to change ourselfs,
Or die in our beds of poionus creations.
 
                              ...Open your eyes, you are dreaming.
 
 

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Prompt 1, A) http://lura-betch.deviantart.com/art/--97956537
Prompt, 3, Dreams be dreams

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  • addyam
    December 26, 2008

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    Wonderful!

    This is delightful. I will need to look up Gaia to truly understand it, but it will be worth the price. It is obvious that you are both a deep thinker and feeler. Lovely. Addyam


  • SpydurPoet gold member
    December 25, 2008

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    With the exception of a few spelling errors, this is was a fantastic poem. I love the beauty in this. Reality and truth, brutal as it is, is still beautiful.
    Thank you for entering the contest and best of luck.
    Write on.
    ~*~SP~*~


  • storiesuntold gold member
    December 23, 2008
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    Excellent

    So true I find this poem to say so much about the human race today


  • Disturbed Prodigy
    December 23, 2008

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    this was wonderful, and i do mean that in every sense of the word, honestly a wonderful read, keep it flowing and good luck in the contest


  • roninwort
    December 23, 2008

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    I really liked the imagery you used in this poem. You did a very good job of creating a picture in my head as i read. Great job

    Ronin

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