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I Hate you!

I hate you everytime an hour passed without a text from you,
The feeling of a dark and gloomy time I had to go through…

I hate you everytime I see you close to another guy,
Feels like my heart can’t help but cry…

I hate you everytime I’m with you and you remain silent,
Feels like I’m going through a series of punishment…

I hate you everytime you keep secrets from me,
Feels like our love is not meant to be…. 

I hate you everytime we met and you didn’t even bother to say hi,
Feels like our relationship is nothing but a lie…

I hate you everytime you make me feel so unimportant,
Feels like the care you’d given before are all with hesitant…

I hate you for making me fall so deep,
Feels like I’m just been taken for a trip…

I hate you for making me believe that your love for me is true,
And now I’m left all alone with a feeling so lonely and blue….

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  • Quietgirl17
    December 23, 2008
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    Very sad poem here. It's very deep and written well. Good job.


  • xDemonicxAngelx
    December 23, 2008
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    Aww this was really sad and I bet many people can relate to this. I liked your style, your rhyming was done well although it did seem a tad forced in places, but other than that I thought it was well written. You did a good job with this Keep it up!

    Take care