I found an elf under my tree;
fast asleep handsome as can be.
Imagery awakened of wanton lust!
I tied him up, removed his garments
under the soot was old St.Nick;
holding his sweet candy-stick.
Blindfolded, bound with my silks
loves magic of feathers tantalized;
his strong thick manly thighs.
Moans, groans screamed into
moist tasty ruby-red lips;
hands fluttered o'er hips.
I gave him an unforgettable
gift of the spiced kiss;
fulfilling his wish on his list.
Such a naughty gal am I,
straddling this horny old guy.
"No baby lay back enjoy
this annual heated ride;
matching grips,strokes in stride.
Happy holidays big elf
my gift to you is love!"
Removing his blinder I licked
his candy-stick...and left him
saying my name is Nick"
"Ho Ho Hoooooooo!"
In a list
A contest entry
- Naughty or Nice? Adult Christmas Contest by StormGoddess.
700 points, ended December 30, 2008, 5 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Does Santa Look Happy after getting his gift?
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Oh boy! I bet that was a present Old St Nick was not expecting! What a tantalizing treat for the jolly elf. Cute and witty with a very deep twist of sensual baboom!
Thank you for entering and good luck
Storm -
Old Nick Ho! Ho! slept under a fairy tree
Angel in whispers took him out to picks
Old Nick Ho! Ho! wept far from the tree
Feather beauty in holiday ice candy licks
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Santa looks very happy to me!
Poor old Santa, more people need to give him a gift at Christman time, he works so hard. But I have a feeling that your gift to him is probably the most precious of all, up at the North Pole it's so cold that they have to go to bed fully clothed, lol, talk about a turn-off!
But what I really want to know is how you got Santa down there to the islands somewhere, can reindeer land in sand as well? I know he needs a vacation, but Santa looks he just having toooooooooo much fun. And, won't his candy-stick melt in all that warm weather?
LOL! Nicely done, Dove, gave me a good laugh, and I know Santa appreciates it!
I love you,
Brazos
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Very cute! Great humor and rhythm. I think the short line segments are also effective. Imagery is also memorable
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THIS MAKES ME WISH I WASN'T SO DAMN SEXY - AS A FAT, OLD MAN SEEMS TO BE HAVING ALL THE FUN!
GOOD LUCK in the contest with this sweet, sensual, and humorous piece, Baby - BUT don't lick OLE SAINT NICK'S PEPPERMINT CANDY STICK too long - as we wouldn't want all the good little boys and girls to miss Christmas this year - if you keep him up for too long! HE! HE! Something tells me a naughty and sensual girl like you got coal in her stocking when Christmas came BUT all of that is about to change as I'm sure Santa will be bringing you plenty of blink from now on as well as a new set of luxurious wheels from now on.
LOL!!!
Love & Peace!
Earl.
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Old Nick Santa got the best treat he had been longing for this holiday season.I admire the un-interupted glow in the cadence.The allusions here did fit in perfectly with the the scenery and the theme.I think you did a very good job on this one.Kudos to you for a job well done.
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holy cripees!!
You've changed i idea of why he's sooo happy and jolly all the time!! l.o.l. uhm..yes, he was a lucky ole fart for sure!
really love this, very amusing, and a bit steamy too!!
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