An insane, strange, as mysterious as sublime,
able to bathe face in pink clouds of sunset,
spirits sink in hours of desolation as lover,
to drink cup slowly in ecstasies to roll senses.
In fact, the less time I would dare to believe,
to swear that I've suffered two years of plague,
to shut my smiles while sensing the fading love
an insignificance of heart notwithstanding sorrows.
If not, what happened to my heart, when I see you,
in a suit alcove to emerge an emptiness, isolation,
you had gone, I knew, but it taught me a compassion
of a painful wounded pinching, flowing hordes of tears.
Nothing more, nothing can become, nor can entirely blank,
of the scattered fragments, although not even gathered,
mirrors are broken to show hundreds of faces more often,
to feel gloomy happiness in splinters of desire, adoration.
Consuming absorbed in contemplation of you, O, loved one,
clothing grief and misery amid trembling fingers different,
making my every second to become a cruel subtle torture,
to hear cries of vicissitudes, misfortunes of my broken soul.
Author notes
~spiritualangel~
( Favourite Color: Blue)
(2) Word prompts: -Shattered
The words, Broken,-Hollow,-Despair and -Betrayed can also be seen reflected in this poem.
A contest entry
- I'm new to AP!!! This is my 1st contest!!! by roninwort.
3000 points, ended January 7, 43 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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Wow. Wow. That was...astounding. I absolutely love where you went with the prompt. The emotion was definitely there. I could almost taste the sorrow.
Thank you for entering the contest and best of luck.
Write on.
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Interesting write here
You have a great form for the words you chose for this piece good luck in the contest
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Wow!!! This is an amazing poem. The imagery you use is so vivid. And the emotion behind these words had me in tears by the end of the third stanza. An extremely beautiful poem and a great entry. Thank you and good luck.
Ronin
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