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Sin

When I'm happy I smile,
But when I'm sad I try,
And it seems so forced,
No matter what or why,

Sometimes I laugh,
but sometimes I don't,
Never comes to late,
for those of you who won't,

I'm always right here,
and again it's a pain,
There's nothing to much,
as insighted gain...

For awhile I know
That I'll be right back,
when times get hard,
I can never slack.

But lazy am I,
and so are you too,
And forgotten webs fall,
Out of the blue..

Times change again,
Reminding me of when,
I use to be happy,
Even if in sin...

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  • mashaw
    January 12

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    i think its bit about how hard its to be yourself in world, what is demanding. good feelings comes from words : but lazy i am ... out of the blue. you describe the good after day feeling in sorrow in humans relationship webs.