As I languish far behind this meaning, 'love',
You! Become the rose that beauty wears,
More handsome than awaits this treasure trove
And far more irresistible than tears.........,
.....Of joy these life long wishes often well-
When someone else can feel and often know
Exclaims that what is lost can never tell,
Time has need to prune to further grow.
Where love can nurture form converge to this
The subtle way it finds a place to sleep,
Discovers what is found as pure and bliss
To simply ask again and with it, keep.
By giving up the priceless wares inside-
The pollen grains of love have reappeared,
To scupper up the nectar both shall hide,
What love decided first was next, hand reared.
In a list
A contest entry
- To Write Love On Her Arms by ShadedRequiem.
400 points, ended January 9, 7 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
what do you think?
Comments
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This is very uplifting. Great job.
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This is honestly a great read my friend, one of my favorites from you so far, keep it flowing and good luck in the contest
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The wording of this poem is superb, really the flow runs so smoothly, the description is perfect, and the punctuation effectivly brings out each line as for once i can see where i need to read over or pause. A great piece of work, really and truly.
Laura.
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