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Unfinished poem

I took a fistful of unwritten words
and turned each one carefully,
like pieces of burning coal,
tried with colors, shapes and sizes,
some straight and some bent like a bow.
watched them carefully from all sides
to find the right one, the wise one,
and I stumbled on the first rows.

Let me be the wind, to sing you a psalm
and play with the edge of your jacket,
let me be the rain you lick from your lips
and the melting snowflake on your palm.


I kept some and modified the rest again.

Let me be a singer and let me be a clown
for you to sing and cry and frown,
let me be your queen without a crown,
love me naked or dressed with a gown.


I tried more but they went their own way.

Be my Eros and I will be your Psyche,
Echo will sing for us, listen to her voice,
and Pan will play his magic flute...

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  • mimiagatha
    December 25, 2008

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    it is clearly unfinished, as it should be. beauty is the best of unfinished poems...


  • Night Hope gold member
    December 24, 2008

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    Lovely penning, my Friend. My favorite part was the second stanza, although it is all quite well done, as always. Good luck in Lane's contest, Sweetie.

  • tara wilson gold member
    December 23, 2008

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    Sonja -- you have always been an inspiration, this is beautiful