I am violent
Prayers roll so elegantly off your tongue
Hopeful child
Waiting for time to stop
You are wrong
Just as time has always shown
You must take it
And smash it
Only when time is no longer counted
Will it stop..
Author notes
I chose image option 10 because I saw all of the clocks and it made me think that someone was paying to much attention to time and watching it pass.. You should only noticed time has passed, once it's passed.. not as it's passing.
A contest entry
- Option, Options, Options by wakawaka05.
2050 points, ended January 6, 32 entries
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Comments
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I like this a lot.
I love the anger in it, and I agree with your opinion of time itself. Another great write -
What a great write. I love your take on the prompt. Thank you for putting why you chose the prompt. Best of luck in the contest and in future writing. Have a Merry Christmas and a Happy New Year.
Caity
>Wakawaka<
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