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I love waking up to my love

But you are dreaming my love
drifting in a sea of sweet goodbyes
remembering the last kiss before you wake up
but you're awake
and he's right next to you
leaning close for another kiss

Author notes

just dreaming

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  • Haygood gold member
    January 2
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    It rambles.

    The thought is good. Is it suposed to be one sentence? Still a good thought.


  • LadySerenity
    December 23, 2008

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    Short and sweet. I like it. Thank you for entering my contest and good luck.

    ~*Lady Serenity

    PS please go back and read my rules so you know what i need you to put in the author notes. Thanks