The hour is late
And dawn draws near
But he's still gone
And I'm still here
Now I know my promise
Does still stand
I'm the luckiest girl
With the most wonderful man
And words can't describe
I don't know what to do
What I'm feeling inside
When its just me and you
--Andi
Author notes
Yeah, I know
-Andi
A contest entry
- the biggest prewrite contest ever by serenity silvermoon.
900 points, ended January 18, 362 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - This Heart Of Mine. by TheSpiralGenerator.
750 points, ended July 4, 103 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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It’s adorable to have those emotions, hmmm? Feeling love is one of the best feelings in the world ... wonderful that you seem to have found what many are missing in there lives ... nice poem by the way as well, hehe ... Hope you’re having a wonderful evening.
G.
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I know thats right!!Its the greatest feeling ever
losing him was the worst though....the absolute worst
-Andi
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