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As You Sleep

Tonight as you lay blissfully sleeping
I will step silently into your dreams
To hold thee close with kisses so soft
Smiling at you while caressing you tenderly

Singing as slowly your happy heart awakens
Laying quietly with you, your soul sighing softly
My hand gently and lovingly caressing your heart
As my eyes dance gaily with your awakening soul

Tis then that my arms will hold you tightly
As my lips kiss yours with a burning passion
Awakening your sleeping soul with my love
Filling your heart with the adoration it deserves

For it has been ordained by fate that I love thee
Together we shall walk from your beautiful dream
Fearing not the words of scorn spoken by others
For they may never know the glory of our devotion

Each sharing our love in the brightness of the day
While we happily live this wondrous life together
Into the silver beams of the moonlight of the night
Sharing the passions of our mind, our heart and our soul

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  • Haygood gold member
    January 2
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    What a nice dream...


  • LadySerenity
    December 23, 2008

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    this is lovely. i love the picture (Dream) being painted here. I love the whole poem. I wouldn't change a thing. Thank you for entering my contest. Good Luck

    ~*Lady Serenity


  • morgana raven Greeters member
    December 23, 2008

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    My boyfriend just linked this poem to me.
    Tis then that my arms will hold you tightly
    As my lips kiss yours with a burning passion
    Awakening your sleeping soul with my love
    Filling your heart with the adoration it deserves

    i love this stanza. This poem has been written brilliantly with lovely emotion
    Wonderful write.
    Laura.


  • nilav
    December 23, 2008
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    enjoyed the love-filled dream making the sleep even more beautiful...good luck in the contest