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Here With Me

I sit up
head throbbing
heart pounding
i can feel you
next to me
but there is nothing there
just the cold
the dark
my memories fading
falling
leaving
escaping
through my fingers
as i reach for them
i want to remember
i want you here again
filling the empty spaces
in my soul
i made a mistake
i want you here
so i can make it right
i want to start again
go back to the fork in the road
i know the path i should have taken
now all i need
here
is you

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Option 29, simply because I love the song

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  • wakawaka05
    December 23, 2008

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    Wow what a great write. I love your take on the prompt. Thank you for putting why you chose the prompt. Best of luck in the contest and in future writing. Have a Merry Christmas and a Happy New Year.
    Caity
    >Wakawaka<