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Rose Essence

Angels are dancing
Rejoicing of new found love
A tender glow escapes their skin
Sending golden lights toward the earth
I run down the caramel roads
To the sand made of sugar
Alas to meet my lover
His hair jet black and skin so fair
Hard to know if he is really there
I chase after him while he turns to the ocean
Stopping at the edge i watch him walk
He walks so far onto the soft blanket of water
Salt is replaced by essence
And worry is replaced by relief
Holding out his arms for my embrace i run
To be greeted by warmth engulfing me
The sea turns red, and bursts to leave cement
While rich red rose petals fly freely
Everything is still while they swirl around us
Our hearts filled with longing

As doubts turn to dust

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*Just Dreaming*

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  • LadySerenity
    December 23, 2008

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    Beautiful! Thank you so much for entering my contest. This is very well written and lovely. This is what i am looking for. Good luck

    ~*Lady Serenity