Did I say I loathe you?

I use to think i was clever,
i'd write little poems and metaphors
and anyone stupid enough to insult me would get some cruel comeback
id insult you,
I'd insult all of you,

i'd tear down your quotes,

belittle your art,

question your god,

mock your "beauty",

but I just can't express my opinions monosyllabicly enough

to adequately show my disgust you vile spew monkeys.

your culture... our culture makes me sick

keep your sharp tongues

I'd rather keep a sharp mind

Author notes

Inspired by all

A contest entry

Option, Options, Options by wakawaka05. 2050 points, ended January 6, 32 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest

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By me, right now

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SmidyMilton
December 23, 2008

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Good
Well, I didn't like lines 10 and 11. It seemed to me as though you were trying to show the reader you know "big words." They just didnt fit in with the rest of the poem... Other than that I loved the message and the feel of this..
wakawaka05
December 23, 2008

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This is a great write. Would you please put what prompt you chose because it isn't obvious to me. Thanks and best of luck in the contest and future writing. Have a merry Christmas and a Happy New Year.
Caity
>Wakawaka<
- Krick
  December 23, 2008
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  I apologize, it was just how i felt after looking at all the pictures, in combination with the quotes, with just a dash of the music so i'm just going to put all
- - wakawaka05
    December 23, 2008
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    Thanks... Its not really that big a deal.. I'm just a curious soul. I can understand the feeling though.