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俳句 haiku

雪　が　ふって
生命　静止した
死　が　白い



yuki ga futte
seimei seishi shita
shi ga shiroi


falling snow
how motionless life
death so white



c2008 vduna

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  • Joseph Hollis
    December 25, 2008

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    I do enjoy writing and reading haikus about snow and winter this time of the year. This is a very deep and thoughtful 'ku. Thanks for sharing.