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Caged Minds

Caged Minds
(inspired by Hot Chocolate)


Choke me with your cum,
as I give you pleasure beyond measure,
treasure my pole as it enters your paradise,
of wet passion as I am stuck in your cage,
feel me as I dig deep with sexual rage,
your screams are my sensation,
my moans show my appreciation,
for your untamed animal instinct,
for I am lost into your dark void of pink,
like a wild animal I ravage your body,
with my tongue,
as I sip on your brown nipples,
can you feel the wiggle,
of my dill pickle,
Dr. Hard Dick is inthe operating room
of lust and infatuation,
caged in your adoration and ready
for penetration!

Author notes

This poem is a response to a poem by a great poet: Hot Chocolate -- "My Cage"!!!
If you don't know of her; you need to check her out as soon as possible. She is a true to life great writer.

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  • brodie25
    February 18

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    sexy and cute?

    like the ravaging of body with tongue description hehe it's very cheeky! caged in adoration, i know the feeling


  • Ms Sexy silver member
    January 10
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    Damn you bac @ it Write more catch up

  • mz.butter
    January 7
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    yes,yes,yes gone head on boy!


  • Expression
    December 23, 2008

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    very very well done...
    hot and steamy..
    keep up the good work and plzz comment on my newest poem would you plzz
    ~kaila~


  • Jeremy0826 silver member
    December 23, 2008

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    Well done to the both of you!
    A great and steamy write you've penned.
    Lovely work and thanks for sharing it!




    Jeremy0826


  • hotchocolate gold member
    December 23, 2008

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    Hee Hee!!!! You know I love this write don't ya That cage is getting alot of play huh LOL!!! Thanks for the recognition and you did a great job on this hon

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