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fallen out

every day i wake up and put a simle on my face
when what i really need is let out all my real feelings
but no ones there to dave me if i drown
hes just gone for good and i cant accecpt that
why cant i let go?
hes moved on why cant i?
i know ill never see him ever again
i wish i could go back in time
and change that one little thing


(chours)
so very basicaly this song is about a boy
who i cant let go of
who doesnt love me anymore
who has moved on to other people
and another life without me


and cigaret after cigaret
i know heel never come back to me
no madder what it is i do
and i need somone to help me get up off the ground
turn around and walk away
leave him out of my life and move on


(chours)
so very basicaly this song is about a boy
who i cant let go of
who doesnt love me anymore
who has moved on to other people
and another life without me


and when i find that person
that will be ther to help me up
and i know i will
ill try my hardest to love them
and never let it die
but im afraid of falling in love again
because if i fall i might not be able to get up again

Author notes

i wrote this about me ex
and the last line is true... because ive been hurt so many times by people who said they would alwayse love me

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  • D.Wolf
    December 23, 2008

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    Different, interesting cold hurting song. Shifting emotions are so hard to bear with change. I feel this pain, you cry from. Its not easy, to move on. Great write though.

    Sincerely,
    ShySuicidalWolf