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Heart's Void

Oh, how I wish I could love you

My heart yearns to adore.

How I wish I could return true

the feelings you have with more.


But alas, if only you knew

that inside my heart forevermore

is a deep void I can't subdue

that thwarted all my love before


If it is me you choose to pursue

I find your choice very poor

and in need of much review

for my love is unable to outpour

 

Your feelings for me you should undo

even if they run as deeps as veins of ore

It would be better for me if you withdrew

My love is not worth fighting for

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  • ADORExo
    December 23, 2008

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    Wow, this was written beautifully. I hate the message though, its so sad! Everyone is worth love (unless your a murderer or rapist :-P) Great job! I'm very impressed! I love your choice of words, sounds very sophisticated
    <3 Ador